Could someone who speaks English as their first language comment on these short sentences please?
............. Hi to all, I want to advertise my site with google search engine. I want to be certain that my texts are without any grammatical mistakes. Since I have limitation in number of my used letters, please don’t try to edit my sentences to improve them. If they are acceptable to use and are not odd sentences please don’t suggest touch them. ******* ►Ad1 Compare Best Web Hosts Reviews. Choose A Reliable, Affordable Host. ►Ad2 Best 3 Affordable Web Hosting. Compare Reliable, Affordable Hosts. ►Ad3 Best 3 Web Hosting Reviews. Choose A Reliable Service To Buy. ►Ad3 Best 3 Web Host Reviews. Compare Top Affordable Hosts. ►Ad4 Top 3 Web Hosting Sites reviews. Find A Reliable Hosting Service. ********* Thank you
Public Comments
- They're all good... except for Ad2.. the first sentence doesn't really make sense.
- I am a native speaker of American English. I hope that my advice is useful to you. The first sentence of Ad 1 sounds a bit odd: the second sentence is OK grammatically, but "host" implies a person (a game show host?). Ad 2: the first sentence is definitely off. The second sentence is OK grammatically, but "hosts" still implies people. Ad 3 (the first one): this is my favorite. Both sentences work fine. Ad 3 (the second one): both the first ("Best 3 Web Host Reviews") and the second sentences ("Compare Top Affordable Hosts") sound like you are reviewing and comparing people who are hosts. Ad 4: the first sentence works, more or less. The second sentence is very clear. Hope this helps!
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